Does my story sound cliche? Re-asking?

Sounds like too much poor me at once though... I love the mom coming back once she's somewhat established herself in this new (although flawed life). If you focus on the expectations of the mother coming back and her hopes of what her mother would be like and then how might, at the end, choose to stay with her crazy aunt and uncle who have loved her the entire time rather than let her mother waltz in and rip her out would be a great ending. I would leave out the stutter. Just talk about her funny relatives, crazy aunt, old rickety house, sci-fi. The loving the uncle thing just seems really random though, in terms of plotline. I would leave out that for sure. it's just kinda weird- , pedophilia. Keep your character quirky, but not weird.